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©2009 `MichelCh
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Profile yourself as you really wish to be,
Looking straight and proud towards your future,
But with a smile because you cannot consider life seriously:
Life is a game, a wonderful and terrible game, so just play you own part…

.°.

The great Zaza on stage, from Los Excentricos, fantastic Spanish clowns …
Le Grand Café Mounis, Graissessac, Southern France.

Canon EOS 400D + Canon Zoom 17-85mm, ISO 1600, no flash.

:heart:

© Michel Lâg Chavarria.
All rights reserved. This image may not be reproduced.

Critiques


:icongetcarter:
Wonderfull, Michel - simply a womderfull portrait!

Where shall I start - let´s begin with the framing.
When I look at this shot I actually see six frames, which is - I tell you right away - too much, taking a lot of impact the shot actually has.
You may ask yourself - six? Yes six! Going form the outer to the inner part I see one thin white, one very thin black, one bold white, one thin grey, one thin white and finally the black area framing your model. This kind of framing does not match to the character of the shot, as it distracts the spectator´s attention needlessly. I would suggest to reupload it blank without any white or grey framing.

But now to the shot itslef - you´ve chosen a very ambient light which coaxs your model without changing his character - as far as I can say. The person fades perfectly into the black background without loosing its outlines.

But the main part of this impressive shot certainly is the clown´s face and his expression you made to capture so well.
With this "simple" shot you manage it to describe his experience of life and the conclusions he drew making them. Your describtion was nice but not necessary - this shot speaks volumes!
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:iconnlr4:
fantastic portrait! great light and expresion

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Nira :bug:



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:iconprivatedanser:
superbe portrait , profile puissant et nez subtilement rouge ! meme la composition , ni centree ni selon "la" regle , est originale !
j'aime . :heart:
:iconmichelch:
J'imaginais volontiers que tu puisses parler un parfait français... Merci infiniment pour ces mots si beaux et si sensibles.... :blushes: :heart:
:iconmichelch:
Muchas gracias darlin'... :rose: :kiss:
:iconprivatedanser:
le francais me viens beaucoup plus facilement aux levres , je me surprend pafois meme a penser en francais . trop de lectures durant toute ma vie :)
aucun probleme , c'est vraiment inspirant , j'aime l'emotion dans ce que tu fais que ce soit paysage ou portrait , j'aime les photos qui touchent autant le coeur que l'oeil .
et merci pour le watch ;) :hug:
:icondoedit:
Never take life seriously, nobody gets out alive anyway. ;)

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Oh plz. Who do you think invented the dark side?
:iconmichelch:
wow... merci encore, je suis très touché... :heart:
:iconaleceia:
wow i love it !
it is very risk taker,
from the portrait point of view
;p

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